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这是上周获奖学生的作文，我点评和批改了一下，分数应该是6-6.5分 In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Schools play an important role in teaching children how to boost good behavior. But there are still some students with poor behavior problems, which may be caused by chil dren’s personal factors as well as outside factors. I would argue this issue could be solved. 点评：第一段话暴露的问题是用词 可以说 how to behave well External factors, or environmental factors 感觉不是 7 分级别的学生 First of all, students from families where their parents have a negative impact on them are likely to have behavioral problems at school, because young people tend to copy
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